Lesson Diary- 31st Jan

On the 21st January 2012 we had to bring in a printed copy of a first draft of our script so we could go round the class and read out our srcipt then get the class to give us feedback so we could make the script better. Over all my groups script got quite a lot of positive feedback and we just needed to re-think the names of our characterd as they didn't really suit the Film Noir genre.